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    • WrCombsW
      WrCombs @Dashrender
      last edited by

      @Dashrender said in Resume:

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      @Dashrender said in Resume:

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      Both fixed.

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      • IRJI
        IRJ
        last edited by

        Drop High School section. Nobody cares about that. Its assumed if no education is listed you have a HS diploma

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        • DashrenderD
          Dashrender @Dashrender
          last edited by

          @Dashrender said in Resume:

          missing punctuation
          and ditch the crossed out stuff - unless someone like scott said to include it.
          The last line also seems awkward on a resume - at least to me.

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          updated

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          • DustinB3403D
            DustinB3403
            last edited by DustinB3403

            I would really rework your experience section. No one really cares for paragraphs on a resume. So for the current role

            Support Techician
            RDS
            April 2018 to Present

            Responsibilities include; Remote System Administration, including hardware problem resolution with Point of Sales equipment including but not limited to sales terminals and printers.

            Additional responsibilities include, back-end data administration and staff training on sales equipment.

            Technologies used:
            SSH, RDP etc etc

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            • DustinB3403D
              DustinB3403 @Dashrender
              last edited by

              @Dashrender said in Resume:

              The last line also seems awkward on a resume - at least to me.

              The goal is to get a better paying job. No one cares about the aspirations, education is great but certifications can show that you can learn. (I know you're working on those).

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              • DashrenderD
                Dashrender @DustinB3403
                last edited by

                @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                @Dashrender said in Resume:

                The last line also seems awkward on a resume - at least to me.

                The goal is to get a better paying job. No one cares about the aspirations, education is great but certifications can show that you can learn. (I know you're working on those).

                yeah, I was thinking the same - the goal should be near the top of the resume - and be specific for each job you're applying for... when possible.

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                • DustinB3403D
                  DustinB3403
                  last edited by

                  Part Time Clerk

                  This section isn't relevant to what you're applying for, I would almost drop the entire section and simply replace it with something along the lines of "Prior work experience is not in my target field. Will answer questions if requested about it"

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                  • DashrenderD
                    Dashrender @DustinB3403
                    last edited by

                    @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                    Part Time Clerk

                    This section isn't relevant to what you're applying for, I would almost drop the entire section and simply replace it with something along the lines of "Prior work experience is not in my target field. Will answer questions if requested about it"

                    This is a good point.

                    You're also young enough that only having the single job being listed likely isn't going to be an issue.

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                    • thwrT
                      thwr
                      last edited by thwr

                      I'm not familiar with US CVs, but I'm missing things:

                      • What are you good at regarding AD? GPOs? Audits? Usermanagement? Scripting? Tell 'em whatever you know.
                      • Ever fixed a breaking issue? Something that could harm your employers business?
                      • "Input menu data" ... no. "Normalized large amounts of data for POS systems"
                      • "Built a home lab network using Ubiquiti Networks PRODUCT A, PRODUCT B, ... to learn XYZ (hell, UBNT is such a good system. Why did you choose them? Price, features, ...)"

                      Hope that helps.

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                      • IRJI
                        IRJ
                        last edited by IRJ

                        Support Technician

                        Skills Used: Active Directory design and configuration, Windows Server 2016 - 2019 , Linux Servers (list distros here), backups , system support, workstations (Windows 10 and Windows 7 Migration), customer training, Networking configuration (Ubiquiti and Unifi), System updates (Windows and Linux)

                        • Experienced in configuring and troubleshooting servers, workstations, printers, terminals, and POS systems

                        • Managed and configured (not sure if you configured or not) VPN connections to remote sites

                        • Responsible for customer training in various areas including best practices on workstations, servers, and system backups

                        • Software Development experience with POS systems. I designed custom menus and GUI components to fit customer needs

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                        • DustinB3403D
                          DustinB3403
                          last edited by

                          Skills section can be updated;

                          System administration, including hardware and system software administration and troubleshooting

                          Remote system administration

                          Domain administration services, including Microsoft Active Directory

                          Customer Service via help desk administration

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                          • IRJI
                            IRJ
                            last edited by

                            Remember: Build your resume for the job you want, not the one you have.

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                            • DashrenderD
                              Dashrender
                              last edited by Dashrender

                              More like this

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                              • DustinB3403D
                                DustinB3403
                                last edited by

                                You could easily add a technologies proficiency area onto your resume.

                                Proficient with these tools:

                                (whatever software tools you use, Vi, SSH, Putty, Windows Server, Linux Server, Hyper-V) etc

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                                • DashrenderD
                                  Dashrender @IRJ
                                  last edited by

                                  @IRJ said in Resume:

                                  Support Technician

                                  Skills Used: Active Directory design and configuration, Windows Server 2016 - 2019 , Linux Servers (list distros here), backups , system support, workstations (Windows 10 and Windows 7 Migration), customer training, Networking configuration (Ubiquiti and Unifi), System updates (Windows and Linux)

                                  • Experienced in configuring and troubleshooting servers, workstations, printers, terminals, and POS systems

                                  • Managed and configured (not sure if you configured or not) VPN connections to remote sites

                                  • Responsible for customer training in various areas including best practices on workstations, servers, and system backups

                                  • Software Development experience with POS systems. I designed custom menus and GUI components to fit customer needs

                                  Remember his job has no actual servers in it, no Linux, and no real developement. Entering data into a system to generate a menu hardly seems like a dev thing.

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                                  • IRJI
                                    IRJ @Dashrender
                                    last edited by

                                    @Dashrender said in Resume:

                                    More like this

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                                    So he does system support

                                    I am sure he has touched windows server before on the job

                                    I am sure he has worked with backups, even if its just using a SaaS solution

                                    Also if he is using VPN to connect to remote sights then he is managing the connection in a sense 😉

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                                    • thwrT
                                      thwr @IRJ
                                      last edited by

                                      @IRJ said in Resume:

                                      @Dashrender said in Resume:

                                      More like this

                                      51feec31-3008-4a80-b29f-9f7e506e1795-image.png

                                      So he does system support

                                      I am sure he has touched windows server before on the job

                                      I am sure he has worked with backups, even if its just using a SaaS solution

                                      Also if he is using VPN to connect to remote sights then he is managing the connection in a sense 😉

                                      Remember, he's 23. No one expects him to be like Tim Berners-Lee.

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                                      • DashrenderD
                                        Dashrender @IRJ
                                        last edited by

                                        @IRJ said in Resume:

                                        @Dashrender said in Resume:

                                        More like this

                                        51feec31-3008-4a80-b29f-9f7e506e1795-image.png

                                        So he does system support

                                        I am sure he has touched windows server before on the job

                                        Not very likely - the sell windows 10 as a server solution (likely illegally)

                                        I am sure he has worked with backups, even if its just using a SaaS solution

                                        I suppose it's possible - but again, it would be inside of the POS app, not likely outside it

                                        Also if he is using VPN to connect to remote sights then he is managing the connection in a sense 😉

                                        That's a stretch, and you know it 😛

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                                        • DustinB3403D
                                          DustinB3403
                                          last edited by

                                          @WrCombs what remote connection tools do you use regularly?

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                                          • scottalanmillerS
                                            scottalanmiller @WrCombs
                                            last edited by

                                            @WrCombs I literally just asked Dash for this. Had no idea that there was a thread.

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