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    • scottalanmillerS
      scottalanmiller
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      @dominica and I got married in Wyoming, NY, actually.

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      • IRJI
        IRJ
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        Anything else jump out to you guys?

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        • IRJI
          IRJ
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          The following recommendations have been made:

          • Make certifications two colums and remove dates and certificate ID numbers
          • Remove duplicate entry of NMAP Scanning
          • Remove Best Buy details. Leave job on resume
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          • IRJI
            IRJ
            last edited by

            P.S. Google drive is not showing two columns for some reason. Even though Word is correctly displaying the changes.

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            • scottalanmillerS
              scottalanmiller
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              Keep address to city, state only. NOthing more.

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              • scottalanmillerS
                scottalanmiller
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                Remove the line about the security certs that is immediately preceding the certs themselves. That's redundant making it very much look like filler.

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                • scottalanmillerS
                  scottalanmiller
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                  Best Buy is so short, I'm not sure that I'd keep it. But it does add an earlier date. Toss up.

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                  • IRJI
                    IRJ @scottalanmiller
                    last edited by

                    @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

                    Remove the line about the security certs that is immediately preceding the certs themselves. That's redundant making it very much look like filler.

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                    My thoughts here were to do a quick count for someone that is maybe just glancing at my resume really quickly. I guess I could say 11 IT Certifications in the title.

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                    • IRJI
                      IRJ @scottalanmiller
                      last edited by

                      @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

                      Best Buy is so short, I'm not sure that I'd keep it. But it does add an earlier date. Toss up.

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                      I wanted to make sure I support my claim of 12 years of experience here. I am trying to summarize my career to someone that may look at my resume for only 5-10 seconds.

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                      • scottalanmillerS
                        scottalanmiller @IRJ
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                        @irj said in Resume Critique:

                        @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

                        Remove the line about the security certs that is immediately preceding the certs themselves. That's redundant making it very much look like filler.

                        0_1501817033003_Screenshot from 2017-08-03 22-23-46.png

                        My thoughts here were to do a quick count for someone that is maybe just glancing at my resume really quickly. I guess I could say 11 IT Certifications in the title.

                        You could. Seems a bit much as it is very visibly 11.

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                        • scottalanmillerS
                          scottalanmiller
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                          Is there an updated copy for us to see?

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