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    • IRJI
      IRJ @stacksofplates
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      @stacksofplates said in Resume Critique:

      I'd remove Shit Hole, WY. Not good form

      😛

      I am not sure that many IT jobs or cities exist in WY 🙂

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      • IRJI
        IRJ
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        Do you think having the confirmation numbers and dates is necessary for the certs? If I dropped those I could probably make the certs have two columns and possibly get my resume to one page after dropping best buy.

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        • scottalanmillerS
          scottalanmiller @gjacobse
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          @gjacobse said in Resume Critique:

          @dustinb3403 said in Resume Critique:

          I'd remove the information about best buy, is it relevant to what you're applying for?

          Agreed... and most times you only need to go back ten years.

          Need to drop A HIPPA Company to the second page

          @gjacobse said in Resume Critique:

          @dustinb3403 said in Resume Critique:

          I'd remove the information about best buy, is it relevant to what you're applying for?

          Agreed... and most times you only need to go back ten years.

          Need to drop A HIPPA Company to the second page

          I go back till my first job, always. It shows your total time in the industry. Given that some jobs specifically want more than ten years of experience, you certainly don't want to be limiting to that.

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          • scottalanmillerS
            scottalanmiller @IRJ
            last edited by

            @irj said in Resume Critique:

            Do you think having the confirmation numbers and dates is necessary for the certs? If I dropped those I could probably make the certs have two columns and possibly get my resume to one page after dropping best buy.

            No, I generally leave those off. No dates either. A cert is a cert.

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            • scottalanmillerS
              scottalanmiller @stacksofplates
              last edited by

              @stacksofplates said in Resume Critique:

              I'd remove Shit Hole, WY. Not good form

              😛

              Yeah, it's redundant.

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              • IRJI
                IRJ @scottalanmiller
                last edited by

                @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

                @stacksofplates said in Resume Critique:

                I'd remove Shit Hole, WY. Not good form

                😛

                Yeah, it's redundant.

                So leave out city/state for different jobs? I've had potential employers and recruiters ask me location wise where I've worked before

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                • scottalanmillerS
                  scottalanmiller @IRJ
                  last edited by

                  @irj said in Resume Critique:

                  @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

                  @stacksofplates said in Resume Critique:

                  I'd remove Shit Hole, WY. Not good form

                  😛

                  Yeah, it's redundant.

                  So leave out city/state for different jobs? I've had potential employers and recruiters ask me location wise where I've worked before

                  No, I just mean that Wyoming and Shit Hole were redundant 😉

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                  • IRJI
                    IRJ @scottalanmiller
                    last edited by

                    @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

                    @irj said in Resume Critique:

                    @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

                    @stacksofplates said in Resume Critique:

                    I'd remove Shit Hole, WY. Not good form

                    😛

                    Yeah, it's redundant.

                    So leave out city/state for different jobs? I've had potential employers and recruiters ask me location wise where I've worked before

                    No, I just mean that Wyoming and Shit Hole were redundant 😉

                    I've never been there, but I am going to guess that there aren't many IT jobs and probably very few if any large companies based out of WY.

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                    • scottalanmillerS
                      scottalanmiller @IRJ
                      last edited by

                      @irj said in Resume Critique:

                      @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

                      @irj said in Resume Critique:

                      @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

                      @stacksofplates said in Resume Critique:

                      I'd remove Shit Hole, WY. Not good form

                      😛

                      Yeah, it's redundant.

                      So leave out city/state for different jobs? I've had potential employers and recruiters ask me location wise where I've worked before

                      No, I just mean that Wyoming and Shit Hole were redundant 😉

                      I've never been there, but I am going to guess that there aren't many IT jobs and probably very few if any large companies based out of WY.

                      NTG is from Wyoming! (Wyoming, NY.) The one that the state is named after, I believe.

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                      • scottalanmillerS
                        scottalanmiller
                        last edited by

                        @dominica and I got married in Wyoming, NY, actually.

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                        • IRJI
                          IRJ
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                          Anything else jump out to you guys?

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                          • IRJI
                            IRJ
                            last edited by

                            The following recommendations have been made:

                            • Make certifications two colums and remove dates and certificate ID numbers
                            • Remove duplicate entry of NMAP Scanning
                            • Remove Best Buy details. Leave job on resume
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                            • IRJI
                              IRJ
                              last edited by

                              P.S. Google drive is not showing two columns for some reason. Even though Word is correctly displaying the changes.

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                              • scottalanmillerS
                                scottalanmiller
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                                Keep address to city, state only. NOthing more.

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                                • scottalanmillerS
                                  scottalanmiller
                                  last edited by

                                  Remove the line about the security certs that is immediately preceding the certs themselves. That's redundant making it very much look like filler.

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                                  • scottalanmillerS
                                    scottalanmiller
                                    last edited by

                                    Best Buy is so short, I'm not sure that I'd keep it. But it does add an earlier date. Toss up.

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                                    • IRJI
                                      IRJ @scottalanmiller
                                      last edited by

                                      @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

                                      Remove the line about the security certs that is immediately preceding the certs themselves. That's redundant making it very much look like filler.

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                                      My thoughts here were to do a quick count for someone that is maybe just glancing at my resume really quickly. I guess I could say 11 IT Certifications in the title.

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                                      • IRJI
                                        IRJ @scottalanmiller
                                        last edited by

                                        @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

                                        Best Buy is so short, I'm not sure that I'd keep it. But it does add an earlier date. Toss up.

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                                        I wanted to make sure I support my claim of 12 years of experience here. I am trying to summarize my career to someone that may look at my resume for only 5-10 seconds.

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                                        • scottalanmillerS
                                          scottalanmiller @IRJ
                                          last edited by

                                          @irj said in Resume Critique:

                                          @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

                                          Remove the line about the security certs that is immediately preceding the certs themselves. That's redundant making it very much look like filler.

                                          0_1501817033003_Screenshot from 2017-08-03 22-23-46.png

                                          My thoughts here were to do a quick count for someone that is maybe just glancing at my resume really quickly. I guess I could say 11 IT Certifications in the title.

                                          You could. Seems a bit much as it is very visibly 11.

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                                          • scottalanmillerS
                                            scottalanmiller
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                                            Is there an updated copy for us to see?

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